Casting off her sleek brown pelt (but holding it close), she rises from the surf. No goddess, though men will be drawn to her, despite–or perhaps because of–her otherworldliness. Through the waves, she walks, clumsily at first, as she adjusts to two legs and to being upright. The world looks different to her now. It feels different, too. The air is cool against her skin; the breeze dances across the new womanly curves of her body. She steps onto the beach, eager to embrace this life, if only temporarily, leaving footprints in the sand. The sea covers and takes them, keeping a trace of her to hold in its depths till she returns to it. And she will.
I’m late, but this is for Frank’s Footprints in the Sand challenge.
Another selkie story–because, well, selkies.
Ohhh… I love this, Merril! A most original take on the challenge.
Thank you very much, Dale!
Whoa … definitely unique!. My first two thoughts were around science fiction and Wonder Woman. Your words unquestionably painted a visual scene. Thumbs up … and a toast to your participation … Well, later today 😉
Thank you, Frank.
It’s interesting how we all interpret things based on what we know and what interests us.
That’s the truth! We interpret things based on what we know and what interests us. Which is why misunderstandings are so easy, and communication is so difficult. Because–interpretations!
Very original and unusual angle to look to the sea and the unknown for this challenge. Well done! Better late than never.
Thank you very much for your lovely comment!
Lovely
Thank you, Derrick.
Ah, the sand is like my memory pillow! It hugs and remembers the shape of my head and welcomes me each time I come back. Fabulous poem, Merril!
Thank you very much, Rose. I like sand like a memory pillow. 🙂
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Fascinating introduction to a new legend for me, Merril! Fabulous!
Thank you very much, Tom! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
If you are interested in the legend, you can find several versions of folk songs about Selkies, and also the movie, The Secret of Roan Inish.
I shall be investigating further… thank you!☺
You’re welcome. 🙂
This is very beautifully written.
Thank you very much, Mary!
Those selkies fit right into the footprints theme. 🙂 I like the description of casting off her sleek brown pelt. This set your story right into your fantasy realm, Merril.
Thank you very much, Robin!
The sea covering her footprints and able to hold them (“a trace of her”) until she returns was beautiful. 🌊
Thank you very much, Robin!
A perfect post to return to on Monday morning! (K)
Aww–thank you. I hope you had a wonderful trip.
It was good, but hard to get back….
This is perfect! 💖
Thank you very much!