Birds take flight
leaving their shadows
dancing there
on blue water
trees reflect, remembering
fields of green and gold.
A shadorma for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, using the photo selected by Jane Dougherty.
Birds take flight
leaving their shadows
dancing there
on blue water
trees reflect, remembering
fields of green and gold.
A shadorma for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, using the photo selected by Jane Dougherty.
This is wistful but not sad. Making the best of it π
Yes, exactly. Thanks! π
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Jane has nailed it
Thank you, Derrick.
So beautiful !
Thank you, Holly! π
My pleasure!
Just beautiful, Merril. What I really like is how you left your verse open ended by not saying why reflection was needed. Excellent. β€
Thank you very much, Colleen!
Youβre so welcome. β€οΈ
Nice wordplay, Merril.
Thanks, Ken.
sweet
Shadows dance, and trees remember…it’s like a held breath. (K)
Thank you very much!
Sometimes, things pass too quickly, with only, the reduced reflection that remained…
Yes, true. Thank you!
You two make a good team π
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