Careening: Quadrille

“This image shows what astronomers think is one of the coldest brown dwarfs discovered so far (red dot in middle of frame). The object, called SDWFS J143524.44+335334.6, is one of 14 such brown dwarfs found by NASA’s Spitzer Space Telescope using infrared light.” Wikimedia Commons

It careens through space—
failed star, the astronomers say,
ancient and cold, they name it, The Accident

because they don’t understand
how compelled, it searches for the light it knows is there

invisible and beyond our perception, like dreams,
constant, like time, endless, eternal.

A quadrille for dVerse using the prompt word careen. I wondered what careened through space and found this article about “The Accident.”

60 thoughts on “Careening: Quadrille

  1. I wonder why it appears as red?
    I am smitten by your post….and actually feel sorry for this lost “accident” star. Wouldn’t this idea make a wonderful children’s book?

    • Thank you so much, Lillian!
      I felt sorry for it, too. 😀 The photo isn’t of the star in my poem (I don’t think). It’s another brown dwarf star. I think it’s red in the photo because it’s an infrared light image.

  2. I’m not good at explaining what I want to say about this piece… although I’ve tried explaining it to myself… but -essentially- even though it’s limited to 44 words, it feels much longer to me – very full of meaning.


    David

  3. This is absolutely mesmerizing, Merril! I especially love the reference to “the light it knows is there invisible and beyond our perception, like dreams, constant.”💝💝

  4. It “works so well” because you are an excellent poet. It hooked me early, thinking that these brown dwarf stars must be different from red dwarf stars, and that what we can see is like a pea pod in the Amazon jungle, a one millionth of half of 1% of what we suspect the Cosmos actually is.

  5. invisible and beyond our perception, like dreams,
    constant, like time, endless, eternal.

    It is fun to be presented with something mysterious, Merrill!

    Hank

  6. Thoroughly enjoyed this one Merril; sent a link to my sciency amigo & he wrote back that he already knew about it. News to me, so THANKS for creating such enchanting & engaging real-world stuff.

  7. True enough, Merril. Dreams and time.. and maybe love… I like to think is endless.
    Crazy, but that SDWFS J143524.44+335334.6, has as almost as many digits as your poem has words.

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