Sylvia
took us unaware
with her violet eyes and rainbow hair,
was she human or sprite—perhaps
a spirit of the light,
or the embodiment of flowers
of all seasons, of all hours.
Once, I saw her twice in a blue moon,
twice, I saw her floating
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a
like
her laughter drifted down from the sky,
lighting it, like a star somehow--yet how and why?
Consider the source—the whispers and sighs
of flowers, of poets, the artist’s eyes.
I’m hosting dVerse tonight. There is some much awfulness and horror in the world, so I decided on a bit of whimsy. For my prompt, I've asked poets to use one or more of the garden rose names I have selected in their poems. I chose Sylvia and Twice in a Blue Moon. My mom’s name was Sylvia. She did not have violet eyes or rainbow hair. She did have an unforgettable laugh. And she was an artist who often painted flowers.
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I love the description and the formatting… when I heard Sylvia I thought about the song Sylvia’s Mother… sung by Dr Hook and the medicine show and lyrics by Shel Silverstein
Thank you. I just looked up the song. I think when my mom was growing up, their phone was really for her parent’s store.
I immediately heard “Sylvia’s Mother.” Such a plaintive song.
It wasn’t a song I thought of, but that’s fun that you and Björn both did.
That song was all over the airwaves when I was in high school. It’s a real earworm.
My husband could sing it right away when iI mentioned it.
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Great poem. Spirited and playful. And a wonderful prompt.
Thank you so much! I’m pleased you like both prompt and poem!
I appreciate a bit of poetic whimsy today! I love the connection to your mother as well.
Thank you, Liz!
You’re welcome, Merril!
This is just beautiful, Merril! Sorry I’m not taking part tonight, I just haven’t the energy with everything else I’ve got going on 🙃
Thank you so much Ingrid.
I totally understand. I don’t think I ever finished reading from last week, and I just couldn’t get the quadrille done. 😊
There is so much reading to keep up with this month!
There is! And I’m not even doing it all. I’m so behind on my actual paying work. . .🤣
🤣 I have that to do too, now the holidays are over…
It’s like test assignment. . .but wait, I have to write today’s poem! 🤣
Priorities!
Beautifully done, and you pulled us effortlessly into your words with those floating letters…yes, it is good to see wonderful poems that soothe these days…
Thank you so much, Ain. Sometimes I need a bit of soothing, and I imagine others do, too.
Merril this is stunning. I love your mom’s paintings and you, using her name. Just lovely! ❤
Thank you so very much, Colleen.
When I saw that was one of the rose names, I had to use it! ❤️
I’m glad you did! ❤
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This is divine dear Merril. 🦋💙
Oh, this is just an incredible piece, Merril. So beautiful. LOVE that balloon!
Hi De! I’m just seeing this comment. Thank you so much! 💙
A beautiful shape poem – for the floating balloon – and inclusion of the flower names. Just beautiful!
Thank you so much, Lillian. I never write shape poems, but it seemed like the right way to go. 😊
And what a delightful whimsy it is.
Thank you very much, Ken.
I agree with Lilian and Ken. 🙂
Thank you! 😊
I love this tribute to your mother. My youngest spent a few years demanding to know why we had not named her Sylvia because it was such a beautiful name. I’m not sure where she encountered it…perhaps some vibrations from your mother’s laugh. (K)
Oh–thank you for sharing that. I’m not sure where her parents got the name either. She found out as an adult that her name was Sara on her birth certificate, as was her cousin’s, and probably a few others. 😀
Names do travel through families, but they don’t always suit.
I suppose not.
Oh, this is so lovely! 💙
Thank you so much, Paula!
The song Sylvia’s Mother also popped right into my head when I saw the rose name Sylvia! It’s a cool prompt with so many possibilities! Love how you incorporated the floating balloon.
Thank you very much, Carol!
Beautiful whimsey conjuring you mother, Merril
Thanks so much, Derrick.
Sylvia’s paintings are lovely Merril. And a lovely lot of lines. I’ve now also got the earworm .. Dr. Hook’s rendition is the best.
Thank you so much, Susan.
Sorry about the earworm. 😀
Love this tribute to your mother and the paintings!
Thank you so much, Linda!
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Beautiful, Merril!
I felt and saw a brilliant balloon.
Although I’ve never seen your mother’s eyes, her paintings show me what she saw through her eyes. Now I know where you get your poet’s eyes from.
Thank you so much, Resa! 💙
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Truly whimsical and delightful! An antidote to the somber times. 💙
Thanks for the lovely prompt.
Thank you, and you’re very welcome, Punam. 💙
Merril, those are such pretty flowers your mom painted. Mine wasn’t artistic, later I found a stickman drawing she had made, hidden away, of a naughty girl and boy. I often wondered if it were really hers, it was in one of her books. No signature.
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Thank you very much, Jim.
My mom always loved art, but she wasn’t able to go to art school when she was young. She really went back to it in her 70s, I think, and showed her work for the first time in her 80s. We have lots of artists in the family.
Funny about that drawing you found. 😊
The tone of the paintings gives me a sense of comfort; much needed in the strange times we’re in…
Things aren’t always what they seem. My vagueness is just a means to keep the dirty laundry from airing out on this platform.
Although the song that is referenced is unfamiliar to me, I enjoyed it very much, and poetry is just as beautiful as art. These two vehicles of mental stimulation accompany each other like two strangers that have an aha moment together on a bus. Never to be associated again.
Thank you for your blog.
Kudos from an underdog.
Thank you for your kind words.
Your writing style is so beautiful! And so are the paintings .
Thank you very much!
Great formatting and poem, Merril. And the accompanying pictures touch the soul with an irresistible tenderness. I just love flowers, whether painted or pictured. 💗💗
Thank you so much, Lamittan. That’s so very kind. ❤️
Gladly. Feel most welcome, Merril ❤
Wonderful! A beautiful tribute to your lovely and talented mother.
Thank you very much. 💙
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