

A contrapuntal poem today, since the Oracle kept giving me phrases and colors.
For the curious, I began with this:

“The mountains are so dominant
that some days the people refuse
to look at them as children
turn away from the fathers who beat them”~ Jim Harrison from Songs of Unreason
Ancient mountains within a blink
stare granite-faced when disaster looms (unseen)
rising through tenebrous skies before the before
in stillness stand when time slows and stops
until the rumbling rocks fall, and then, you move to avoid the sudden slap
a tumbling torrent, of striking blows–too late to turn away–
forever changing what was you’re buried in the detritus of dreams
For Jilly’s Day 12 of 28 Days of Unreason, poetry inspired by the poetry of Jim Harrison. This is another cleave/contrapuntal poem or cleaveapuntal or contracleave. . .
Whatever—it’s a bargain, three poems in one. 😉
His thoughts And prayers
were broken-winged she thought, meaningless things
never soaring sometimes boring, never driving
far to the stars, where she longed to go,
but earth-tethered unfeathered, she remained
he stayed, staid, while she longed for blazing rays,
only in night’s dreamscape wandering high to dance together in the sky
A contrapuntal poem for dVerse, where Paul is tending the bar. My poem is three separate poems.