17 thoughts on “Second Featured Haiku”

1. And another lovely one!

   • Thank you!

2. Well done. 🙂

   • Thank you! 🙂

3. Nicely done, Merril. Congratulations!

   • Thank you, Jill!

4. Congratulations! I like the way you used time.

   • Thank you!

5. Swirling moonbeam dreams … WONDERFUL.

   • Thank you very much!

6. Wonderfully dreamy. (K)

7. Dreamscapes are lovely; I’m always sad that they have to disappear at dawn. 😦
   I’m learning so much from you about how to make much out of 5-7-5.

   • Thank you, Pam.
     I am really not a haiku expert, but I’m pleased you enjoy these. Traditional haiku have a “season word,” which these do not necessarily have.

     • I teach haiku to my creative writing students, and we all realize that the simplicity of the haiku is what makes it so difficult!

     • I think they are very difficult to write!

     • The better one gets at writing haikus, the more difficult they are!

     • 🙂

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