Reflection, Odilon Redon
Almost-color in the clouds–
dark ghosts–that blush-tipped feathers
wing away, the dreams that linger
~in the after-winds of time~
we watch the fire-heart of the sky
dazzle us with flower-flames–
singing songs of a thousand ifs
~in a shimmering symphony~
the heavens dance,
giant birds soar, their iridescent splendor a-flight,
traveling home, bright jewels in the night.
A double puente, which probably isn’t a form, from my Saturday morning collaboration with the Oracle. I’ve been having a hard time focusing the last couple of days, so I’m taking it. And Redon, of course.
Yesterday and today: Merril's historical musings 
I love this dreamy double puente (who cares if it is officially or not?)
Thank you! 😀
The Oracle/Muse seemed determined that this was the way the poem was going, so I went with the flow.
Why fight it?
Especially when the results are so wonderful! Going with the flow is so “releasing”, isn’t it?
Thank you. Yes, who am I to argue with the Oracle? 😀
I sure wouldn’t… she’s there for you 😉
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Simply beautiful, Merril. I’m glad you “went with the flow.” Enjoy your Saturday! ❤
Thank you, Jill! 😀
I like the shape of the double puente, Merril, and the emphasis on the isolated lines, and love the lines:
‘we watch the fire-heart of the sky
dazzle us with flower-flames–
singing songs of a thousand ifs’.
Thank you very much, Kim. I appreciate your close reading.
I was going to make the poem not really a puente, but the Oracle seemed to insist I do it this way. 🙂
It flowed like the river, and like the red sweep in the painting. You had birds, I had fish. They’re interchangeable really 🙂
Thank you, and I think you’re right! 😀
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I love the idea of feathers painting the sky. That is a magical painting, and your words fly with it. (K)
Thank you very much, Kerfe!
This is beautifully done … puente dual … why not?
Thank you very much!
It seemed the way it was meant to go. 😀
So lovely!
Thank you so much, Katy!
Lovely Merril – always such a pleasure to come by and see what magic your muse has wrought – 🌺
Oh, that is so sweet, Susan. Thank you!
Lovely rhythm
Thank you!
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