I don’t think I ever shared this haiku. Thanks again, Freya.
shore slides beneath sea
lovers in flirtatious dance–
timeless, rhythmic waves
© Merril D. Smith 2020
Merril D. Smith is currently working on two reference books about rape–and a book of poetry.
Here is the fifth haiku from our Featured Haiku Writer. The first line of this haiku struck me from the first reading. I love the way Merril develops the image throughout the poem
This haiku is part of our ARTURINA theme!
This reminds me of that painting we have all so often used as inspiration…I’m sure you know the one I mean. (K)
I’m pretty sure I know the one you mean! 😀
Very nice, Merril! I’m happy you shared.
Thank you, Jill.
Oh, this is a splendid haiku, the entire dance of life in three short lines!
Thank you so much, Liz. That’s such a wonderful comment!
You’re most welcome, Merril!
Wonderful – as is Liz’s reading of it
Thank you, Derrick. I agree about Liz’s reading.